Chapitres

Hans-Werner Jacobi Jeu 6 Mar - 20:56

While the documents is in general well written, I find the style of some of the chapters heterogeneous and some repeat previous chapters. This mainly concerns chapter 11, which repeats many aspects already treated in chapter 5. I believe that the topics treated in chapter 11 can be integrated into chapter 5 (or the other way round). It is also unclear why chapter 10 is separate from chapter 1. I believe it would be better to merge these two chapters.